Is It Written In The Stars?

Is It Written In The Stars?

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

                                                                                                

 

Everything has become clear

As the midnight sky,

Every star is a piece of the puzzle

 

            Each one a glimmer into my

                        Past, present or future.

 

Before hidden in the clouds of uncertainty

And the bright lights of the cities pain and misery

Now they shine brightly for infinity to see.

 

They light the way through endless

Space of hopes and dreams.

 

Some even connect to make out

The real me for caring eyes to gaze upon.

 

In the end the stars may not have written my destiny

But with so many ablaze in my minds galaxy

The options are  as endless as sky I keep my eyes fixed upon.

 

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Well said, I'd like you to consider revising your last sentence Dale, it is a fragment.
The options are as endless as sky I keep my eyes fixed upon...
The options are as endless as the sky my eyes are fixed upon.......suggestion.
........as the sky I feast my eyes upon........suggestion.
Beautiful thoughts here.
Helen :-)


Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is incredibly beautiful, and strangely makes me think of the lion king.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firstly, wondrous! I loved it. I always think of the stars as the dreams I have had at night...there are so many to recall and they are just there whenever you want to look back or up! LOL. There is a beauty and rare feeling when the stars come out...it is like looking at so many life's at once...I once love this piece!

Love,
Janice Ann

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every star is a piece of the puzzle
Each one a glimmer into my
Past, present or future.

Beautiful words. This poem seranades my soul with with a twinkle.

Well written, if I may suggest in this line
The options are as endless as sky I keep my eyes fixed on.
(options endless as the skies my eyes are always fixed upon)

I only suggest becuse I think the upon is more poetic and in phrasing it this way you can eliminate the use of my and I in the same sentence.

Love the words used in this piece, beautiful.




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem...makes me feel like I am laying on the
ground looking up at the night sky, and I do like observing.

I really think these stanzas are very powerful...
And the bright lights of the cities pain and misery

Now they shine brightly for infinity to see.

Such imagery there.

In this line I think you need to read over: In the end the may not have written my destiny

It doesn't quite make sense.

The same thing goes for this one: The options are endless as sky I keep my eyes fixed on.

This is a wonderful poem overall. AD




Posted 16 Years Ago


Once again a beautiful piece from Mr. Rock And Roll Cowboy!!
I love the whole thing!!
I've really love stars so it's really great that someone has incorporated stars into such a beautiful message!!
Great write!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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