Afternoon Sunroof.

Afternoon Sunroof

Look over the ocean

at the sun setting

like it does everyday.

Look at the rays 

not in disarray,

For it creates a roof

over the ocean

that doesn’t block the sky.

instead it accents the beauty

that lies between

the earth and blue ceiling

in the house that God built.

though. Soon it will will be gone

when the sun hides behind the skyline

while waiting on another day.

But the beauty will always remain

to those fortunate to see the glory

dnd have the heart

to apreciate natural magnificent. 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Indeed. If only all these rush abouts understood the balm of just taking a moment to appreciate nature and may ... poetry. I think I will read you once more before I see myself out. Wonderful write:)

[LadyNaida]

This is a Beautiful poem!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

why, thank you so much

[LadyNaida]

You're welcome

[Amy R]

This poem reflects on how natural phenomena can accentuate the splendor of the world and invoke appreciation in those who are willing to observe it.

The phrase "house that God built" suggests a spiritual dimension, inviting readers to consider the divine aspect of the natural world.

A very beautiful poem, I enjoyed it alot.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much. I'm glad to hear that.

[Amy R]

You're welcome.

[Betty Hermelee]

You place a gold star on the sun, as you should because its beauty shines all over our universe...and to see it rise and fall is a truly magnificent moment in the book of nature....one can still see the sky and the moon...and the sun also gives us energy in addition to its magnificence..... beautiful write!
Warmly, B

[Einstein Noodle]

your poem blesses me with a call to appreciate .. not take for granted .. and the sun not blocking but accentuating the wondrous and beautiful .. blessed in this reading experience Cowboy!
E.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you very much. glad you liked it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Beautiful imagery in this wonderfully descriptive piece of writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much