Janet

For a lady at my church that has fully caught my attention to say the least

From the moment I saw her

captivation hit me

at  the speed of light.

The moment I talked to her

I was entranced

by her sweet charm.

Meeting her at church

it would be easy to say

she looked like an angel,

but that comparison

is far too ordinary for her.

Her outer beauty

is as bright as

the afternoon sun

on a clear day

with an inner beauty

that is like the star of Bethlehem,

standing out from all the others.

in her presence

My stomach is a jar of butterflies.

My mind the tornado on a Kansas farm.

and my  heart becomes the roadrunner

that the coyote couldn’t slow down.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

OH so nice. Lucky Janet. Sublime write, Dale:)

[Antifranticbabydoll]

This is beautiful, to have someone write poetry about them is probably the most romantic thing anyone could do.
Keep writing from the heart! Loved it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much

[Im His Daughter]

Awww this is so sweet! What a great poem!! Love it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much

[Betty Hermelee]

How romantic and luscious this poem is: portraying how much love a person can give to another....you express this so well; your kindness, caring and love truly shine through
warmly, B

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!🌷
Warmly, B

[LadyNaida]

Hello,
This poems conveys a strong sense of admiration for the woman mentioned. The use of metaphors and smiles, such as "captivation hit me at the speed of light' and the inner beauty that is like the star of Bethlehem," effectively highlights her perceived uniqueness and beauty. Wonderful read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend.
"in her presence
My stomach is a jar of butterflies.
My mind the tornado on a Kansas farm."
I liked the above lines and when someone excite our heart. We hope they can love us back. I loved the complete poem and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

and my heart becomes the roadrunner

that the coyote couldn’t slow down.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really love the idea that comparing her to an angel would be far too short in describing her.

alluring piece, Dale.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jacob

[Poetic Beauty]

We have those people that enthrall us with their inner light and outward beauty. The captivate our hearts and thoughts as if we are teenagers again. I loved this poem especially the last two stanzas

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so very much.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome Cowboy. I’m glad to see you writing poetry still.