Crystal Eyes

With her crystal eyes she can see

 

Deep into the part of me not touched by light
Like the new seeds planted in the earth.
When she looks at me I feel like
The hero I’ve never been
The savior I could never be
But through her crystal eyes
I feel that is the real me.

Looking into her crystal eyes
I see such untainted beauty
So beautiful it makes the Garden Of Eden
into a plain landscape of grass and trees.
She quenches my minds thirst
feeds my hungry heart
And protects my damaged soul.

Through her crystal eyes
It’s clear to see I am potential land
And she is the miracle rain.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Dale,
Thank you for putting this in our profile section so I could read it! It is just lovely, as it is calming and filled with admiration and love for another. From the beginning to the end it is beautiful!
I love the last lines............
Through her crystal eyes
It's clear to see I am potential land
And she is the miracle rain
..........just lovely!
Now, just throw in a rainbow for blessings, and you have the fill package!
Sheila

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Looking into her crystal eyes

I see such untainted beauty

So beautiful it makes the Garden Of Eden

into a plain landscape of grass and trees.

She quenches my minds thirst

feeds my hungry heart

And protects my damaged soul.



Through her crystal eyes

It’s clear to see I am potential land

And she is the miracle rain.






Wow this was just stunning my Friend Dale.



Thank you fro sharing blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for traveling back in my catalogue and for the kind review.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Your catalogue LOL... I love how you put that. You're welcome was a pleasure. Benita

[Lily Mae]

I absolutely love this. You see peoples souls through their eyes..and you've obviously had that connection here. This is beautiful and sweet. My favorite line is "she is the miracle rain". :) very nice..x

[StacyPerry]

Very nice. A good write.

[Jessica Dallaire]

Awwh, this is so precious! I love this. ^^

[Joanna Maharis]

Wow! This is so very beautiful. I like the imagery you have throughout this piece. You have a gift for enabling the reader to connect with the narrator of your writing. There is so much deep passionate emotions here, and I felt it all. I say, Bravo! I really love this piece of writing. It is also musical, which makes it even more beautiful. When reading this I felt like my emotions and the emotions of the narrator were one and the same, because the connection between the narrator and the reader is so strong. Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful piece of pure artistry. It was such a pleasure to read.

[closed account]

seeing yourself through her eyes.... maybe something
that you didn't realize you are....seen through her eyes..
so beautiful..

[Ralphy]

Eyes are the micrales of the world, for through them we see the beauty in a web, and the knowledge of the necessity of what is why. Crystal Eyes takes me on a trip of excitement through new birth that shares dreams and vision that ignite a warming of the soul�nice write

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Watch him blossom, watch him grow. Everytime I read you, you seem to keep getting better and better. A great write.

[just is]

Wow! This is such a beautiful write I like this alot.
This is such a sweet write.