A Vampire's Dream Girl

                                                                                                

 

Her auburn hair is like an eternal fire

That set men’s souls ablaze with desire

making them helpless to resist

the path to dark temptation.

 

That alabaster skin oh so silky smooth

Gives the illusion of heaven

Between those sinfully milky thighs

That men would die to be between.

 

Lusting for the afterlife

For it has become her orgasm

When she uses sex as a skill

To draw in her victims.

 

She’s a vampire’s dream girl

With a taste for crimson glory

And seducing all that is living

With her undeniable sexuality.

 

Reviews

[closed account]

very nice and very sexy!!

[Stacey Watts]

Very erotically written piece. You write this sort of stuff very well. Excellent job.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wickedly delicious .. i love Vampyres..and poety and stories of them .. this is a good one!
I also love True Blood.. lol Going to try it when it goes on the market..
Chloe

[Sorry Infamous]

The second stanza is by far the most powerful. I loved the erotic imagery of it.

[Lestat's daughter]

She sounds more like a succubus more than enything else.

[Vatsayayana]

Such a sinfully erotic piece. Truly devastating in the presence of such femininity and sexuality and feminine prowess. She's a purring huntress, skillful in all the tastes and delights of the darkened bedroom. This is a visual, a glorious whirlwind of a visual for me. I can just feel her and see her. The sounds, the smells. It's intoxicating, like a rich perfume. Full of sex, darkness and all woman. Brava!

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Very erotic.
Dark.
So sinful.
Temptation.
It's so wicked.
An extremely lustful piece.
Slightly humorous.
Very vivid.
Great details.
You painted a beautiful picture for me.
Lovely flow.
Good rythme.
Wonderfully written.
Great Job!
^_^
This is an awesome poem.

[Dezaraye]

Definitely a vivid piece. I love auburn hair ... I wish mine were that color.

I liked this ... it's a little dark and you use a lot of vivid imagery.

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"Lusting for the afterlife
For it has become her orgasm
When she uses sex as a skill
To draw in her victims."

Oooh . . . sinfully erotic, yet very well-penned, dear poet!