If My Life Was Metaphorical Entertainment

If My Life Was Metaphorical Entertainment

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

Life is not perfect.

And if life were like a song

 And when those imperfections seem to be written

In a major key,

I will sing my song

Knowing perfectly well

That I am out of tune,

 But at least I’m singing on.

 

And if life was like Star Wars

And it felt like the sith

Ruled the word

I will become a jedi,

 because I know

The force will always

Be with me.

 

If life was a comedy club

I will always deliver

The punch line

No matter how many times I’m heckled,

For I will be laughing inside.

 

In conclusion

I will treat life

Like entertainment

Through the blockbusters and flops

And act out my improved lines

Until god calls a curtain call,

Or rolls the credit.

 

Even then there is no “the end”.

© 2023 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I have become a old man my friend. My only wealth are my grandchildren. The curtain call will come. What will we leave behind? Nice movement of thoughts. You made the reader ponder and think.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words
And if my life were a country song, I'd play it backward so I would get my man back, my dog back, my truck back, my job back, and I'd sober up! Just kidding. I don't drink. I love the optimism of this poem. It is a testament to the human spirit, and how important it is not to let circumstances dictate our reality. Thank you for this reminder.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

thank you so much for your kind words
It is a wonder to walk through life... yes... every scene and script unfolding... some parts we write... and others are written for us... So well done, my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

thank you so much
No end ... until there's a writers strike. The production values in life depend on so many things. God as a director. Your friends as producers. I hope your musical has come in under budget despite the cost of taking the whole production to a galaxy far away.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Life is something I felt I don't know. Beautiful lines

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

why thank you
This is a positive look at your life and the world in general. I applaud you for your outlook. I think many could benefit from this poem.

Great job, Cowboy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

why, thank you so much
Keep going strong to where your purposes belong. A very powerful and effective poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

thank you so much
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome sir.
One thing is for certain ... life goes on. With or without us, failing or succeeding, it goes on. Our perspective determines everything.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love these lines, especially:

I will sing my song
Knowing perfectly well
That I am out of tune,
But at least I’m singing on.

Until god calls a curtain call,

Even then there is no “the end”.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

thank you so much
MomzillaNC

1 Year Ago

yvw 😎
I sometimes feel like a little piece of a bigger puzzle, and that life is just a game. No matter how it ends, we start over, somewhere, somehow, and get to play again.. Enjoyable read with food for thought. Nice poem =)

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

why thank you so much

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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