LetThe Faults Rust Away

When the day is done life goes on.

Mistakes cannot be erased

But they cannot exist

In your soul

Like an ink stain

Or soon it will become

a black hole.

If you treat negativity like acid

Soon your life will

Fall apart at the seems.

 

When the mistakes are intentional

They become like a magnet,

That is when it is urgent

To not let your heart not become metal

Otherwise your life will become

Permanently rusted.

Reviews

[Gee]

The only thing to do is learn from them and move on.
A message many could learn from

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

that is so true.

[willweb]

What a great message this sends. Indeed, you cannot dwell on mistakes or they will become an irritant and end up taking you down in the long run. Wonderfully expressed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

why thank you so much

[light and ashes]

"It is urgent to not let your heart not become metal?"

[Chris Shaw]

I really like the message here Dale. Do not dwell on mistakes made. Accept, vow to do better and move on. If they linger, they can turn toxic. All that negativity is bad for the soul.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the feedback