Life Goes On

  

Smile through the dreams you made

and laugh in the face of pain

as you show misery a good time.

 

Allow the rains of liberty to help

the negativity to roll of your back

and soak into the ground where it belongs,

 

where the sun don’t shine… to be walked upon.

 

Let the rays of sunlight project

the magic of your true essence

and flourish amongst  the living

as the zombies of the world

befriend the shadows of hate.

 

For the world keep turning

dark or light…

hot or cold…

rich or poor,

 

With or without you life goes on,

 

so wouldn’t you rather grab it

then it grab you?

 

Reviews

[Joy C]

I like it. This piece is a great feel- good piece. I especially like the part where it says to discard misery on the ground... "where the sun don't shine� to be walked upon." It is a good imagery, so clever. It is this kind of lines that makes the bottom of my heart has a "ting" sensation.
By the way, is this a typo?

Allow the rains of liberty to help

the negativity to roll "of" your back

did you mean roll "off" instead?

[Victoria Lee~]

omg... this is amazing. we must be on the same wave length.... glad to be in the same time zone with you my dear friend.. as I am up late enough to catch your late night writes when most of the world is sleeping....

[Carole]

I love this! Sounds like you have made a courageous stand. Life, does indeed go on! Well done!

Allow the rains of liberty to help

the negativity to roll of your back (change of to *off!) No biggy. Just thought I would point it out so you can change it...

Love the strength in this piece. :-)

[Ralphy]

Now that's an interesting poem. I find it Intriguing and full of insight...Nice work