Hair muse

I've been seeing a stylist a couple times that I am like. I am 99 percent sure she likes me. This is the poem I plan to put in a Christmas card I will send to where she works.

From the moment we talked it felt so natural 

It was easier than breathing.

For your personality

Is so delightfully infectious

I hope they never find a cure.

 

And It begins and end with your positivity that shines brighter than the star, the wise men followed, that started Christmas.

 

 

The only thing that outshines brighten than

Your inner beauty is that that is can be Seen by the naked eye.

For head to toe you’re a work of art.

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Dale, this is a beautifully heartfelt poem. Hope it works out..Merry Christmas my friend..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you tiny dancer. Merry Christmas to you too

[Ladysue]

Thanks Cowboy..🙂🎄

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Dale.. a lovely Christmas ❤️ love poem.
A hair stylist is an Artist that sees the inner self. Wishing you the Joy of the winter solstice … with Peace that covers the Earth. Amen… Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much
pat

[Einstein Noodle]

have to agree with Ciara about proof reading .. it is important and simple spelling and grammatical errirs take away from otherwise beautifully flowing works .. i have to say Sir Cowboy .. you are brave to admit to seeing a "stylist" :)))))))))))))))))))) i thought cowboys used rusty straight razors to cut their hair ... there is a glorious story of love at first sight in your poem .. it makes my heart jump at the chance of it .. i too am a dreamer and optimist and no matter how many times a sting is felt .. i keep getting in the chair just to have her (whomever that may be) run her stylistic fingers through what hairs are still up top ... this one reads kind of confessional my friend .. if it is .. i wish you the best of luck with your approach ... and may your image of her and you come true
E.

[Ciara]

I think it's a nice poem.
Proof read before you print it.
2nd stands the word end needs an s.
Also 2nd line of 3rd stanza didn't read right. Wondering if it's a typo
Aside from that, good luck!

[William Michael Reeves]

Now you're going to have a bunch of poets from around the world hanging on the outcome of your scheme. Be sure to put a little lock of your hair in the card.