That's an interesting way to think about life. Life can be very long, almost as if it was infinity as long as you have a healthy state of mind and your heart is pumping freely, not boiling angrily. When you are angry, taking on stress that is when death comes knocking at your door. This was thoughtfully written!
I love that analogy of hearts boiling. Trying not to let the spirit burn off like cheap cooking wine. This poem is like a little recipe for life. Good eatin' Dale! Your writing is tasty too.
A heart on simmer. I like that. Boiling over sounds like spilt milk, no good. We are a long time dead. Each moment counts. Best we make the most of all those moments. Hope you are doing ok Dale.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thank you chris. I am doing well, I hope you are as well.
Indeed, just one day at a time. Actually, just one moment would be better. If you can manage this, your heart will never boil over the past or future, for you will know the only time is now.
Infinity is reality
You should never
Let your heart
Start to boil,That is the key
To not letting your spirit
Evaporate
Then your soul
Will never be served cold.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
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It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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