My Gift To Life

 

Each stroke

Of midnight

Is the first day

Of the rest of my life.

For it is not over

Until the end

Is written

In black and white.

So I sit and wait

To hear the sun rise,

While watching it

Through

The kaleidoscope’s eyes. 

For that is the greatest treasure

I can give

While my heart tries.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A new day starts when the clock strikes midnight. It is the first day of the rest of your life. When you have had a really bad day, that is worth remembering. Tomorrow might be better. Thank you Dale.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale.. reminds me of the 🎶 Song, “Morning has broken like the first Bird” by Cat Stevens…. softly, Pat

[Cherrie]

I like the upbeat tone in this one. So many fear the stroke of midnight. Forgetting it is the start of a new day.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

so true. thank you.

[Relic]

This offers much hope to those who are losing theirs.

Nicely done Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'My gift of life'
Rock and roll cowboy,
Your life is a gift and to be wonder is surly an apt response. I see it throughout your poem. Your heart-soul is truly meant to be held with love and patience by the only one who will ever truly know who you are. Jesus God's Son already has made a way. It is finished. This the greatest gift is available to all upon request. Our pain and sin washed away by The sacrifice on a cruel roman cross. I hope you find true love like this which every thing streams from and to.
Bless you in your life and writing.
kathy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much Fran.

[MomzillaNC]

"I can give
While my heart tries"

Indeed… we are all here to give with trying hearts. What a musical and profound write. Very Rock n Roll.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so muchh.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw 😎

[Fran Marie]

Beauty within this
well penned piece
ah yes to hear the sunrise
and watch with kaleidoscope
eyes...nic work Dale

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Fran

[Patricia]

I love how you can hear the sunrise, there is music there. A beautiful, positive and peaceful piece of poetry

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Pat

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is thought provoking piece!
Each stroke of midnight is the first day of the rest of my life! That line for some reason has a peaceful feel to it!

[KAREN]

I liked this a lot!
So I sit and wait
To hear the sunrise,
While watching it
Through
The Kaleidoscope's eyes.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you.

[KAREN]

You're welcome!