The Pi Of Life

a senryu

 

The value of pi

Is really a formula

For all human lives.

 

Reviews

[Aura]

Pi =3.14, this is interesting. A formula for all human lives. Trying to say that like how a circle has no end, so does the human life? Circle of life, afterlife being born again ?this was thought provoking, at first it didn't make sense to me, I'm not much of a math genius so I didn't understand when I'd be using the pi formula in reality. But it seems you are talking about life, and rebirth. Interesting read

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Aura]

You're welcome!

[JE Falcon]

I like your Senryu but would disagree about pi. ...

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes we like the security of drawing that circle. Even if it is an illusion.
Excellent poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again

[KAREN]

Nicely penned, and may I say, thought provoking! Really good!!!!

[MomzillaNC]

Love haiku and am always impressed by it the depth in so few words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much

[MomzillaNC]

yvw 😎

[Fran Marie]

Deep thoughts in a
nicely penned senryu
Good job...

[Patricia]

I love this! This is so brilliant! Pi, yes we are……….on and on and on

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Pat.

[Patricia]

you're welcome Hugs!

[William Michael Reeves]

Here's a couplet if you feel like writing a Renga with me....

Living three points one for one
Love life give to each other

If you answer with another Senryu we could keep it going for a few. I really like this theme!

[Ladysue]

A brilliant and thought provoking senryu Dale..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you tiny dancer

[Einstein Noodle]

nice senryu sir! well thought out says i and with a deep meaning within the union of science and poetry .. love it .. all things being equal ... one can take this in any number of ways to justify a position .. being born equal is obvious says i! it's what happens afterwards where inequality appears .. for any number of reasons .. some put upon one by others ... some put upon ourselves by ourselves ... maybe the fulcrum of which is how much one values the material world or not ... for me .. Faith plays big in the mix .. really fine write says i .. inspiring for sure
E.
ps. if i may ask ... whatever got you musing on pi? :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. I am glad when someone finds then more then one meaning in my words