On The Wings Of

A senryu

When bird’s feathers fall

The people have been blessed with

the best gift from God.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words my friend. My grandchildren collect the fallen flowers. Awards from the sky. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. I was inspired by a passage in church.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Patricia Wedel]

Birds are the best gift of Nature as God sends Angels to spread their Wings and multiply… leaving feathers as a token of love.. their song 🎶 is tucked under their wings as assurance that Music is eternally orchestrated from on High. Amen… gently, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

amen to that. thatnk you pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and do they allow us to use them to fly, ourselves?
perhaps...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good point Jacob

[Cherrie Palmer]

This style of poetry is power packed, and what you've written is lovely Dale. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you Cherrie

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I'm not by nature a religious person I tend to lean agnostic on such things. But with that said the message of this art is powerful and resonates with a truthful grace. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Patricia]

I like this, I could never bring myself to pick up one and keep it, it seems like they should stay where they fall, like it’s taboo or something but I do admire them.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Patrica