The Metaphorical revelation

 

 

Once in a while

When the sky is blue

there are clouds unseen

that catch the tears

of those betrayed by eternity.

 

That leads to an epic moment

when falling feathers

hit the ground

causing the silence

to take a look at itself

and pass judgment

on their purpose .

 

 

then when the wind

flys in like a hero

to make all plants sway,

Confirming that life is saved.

 

That is the moment when

All of creation become one,

Metaphorically speaking.

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

Nicely done and it flows so very well, loved the ending.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Einstein Noodle]

eternity is filled with our mortality eh!? when the wind makes the plants sway ... ahhhhhhhhh! love that sir! quite literally ;)
E.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much

[barleygirl]

The other day a limb crashed into my deck cover with a loud bang & I almost thought I wuz having this kind of inspired moment! Nicely intriguing puzzle that the reader can fill in (((HUGS)))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much