Sweet Cure

Your insights I compare to

a gentle summer’s rain…

 

Stimulating and refreshing.

 

 

Your heart reminds me of

those childhood dreams…

 

Innocent and limitless.

 

 

Your reflection for me is

completely angelic…

 

Classic Hepburn with a touch of heaven.

 

 

And just one glimpse

into your precious soul

is the sweet cure

to a bitter world.

 

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

this is a beautiful piece, dale. the simplicity and brevity of it only add to it's quality and power. i love this piece.

"Your insights I compare to

a gentle summer's rain�"

this has a sort of shakespearean hook to it - that "summer's day" line

"Stimulating and refreshing."
i like how you say the insights are stimulated and refreshing - there's a feeling of aliveness then - which sometimes is all we want/need - is to be stimulated and refreshed.


"those child hood dreams�"

i would bring "childhood" together

"limitless" was a great word to use, and it complements the "innocent" so well - since innocence is often seem as limiting or naive, but the limitless expands the possibilities of being innocent, to which there are many

"Classic Hepburn with a touch of heaven."
can't go wrong with Hepburn! lol


"the sweet cure

to a bitter world."

love how you interwove the title into the ending - but didn't just end it with it, that works well. and yes - the world is bitter, adn what we all need is a "sweet cure" to it - how fantastic!!! this piece is wonderful

[Seriana]

Dale, this is lovely. Such a tender thought, and wonderful way to express your adoration for another who clearly means so much to you. It was simple, and sweet. Nicely done!

[Laura Sparkle]

Beautiful indeed! I loved it, it warmed up my soul. :)

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A beautiful write, and a wonderful way to end it.