Past Your Eyes

Open tour eyes, wide.

You see a place where cows

Go bathroom

Where they eat.

Chewing all day

To make the miracle

That looks like

A liquid blank slate.

 

Marvel at the tranquility

That exists in a place

That goes beyond the fence.

 

Take a look at this field

That holds an essential

Key to life

In the face of death

And not noticing

That the grass

Is still green.

Reviews

[Relic]

I used to see cows all the time, and yes, they're a bit in their own world, but that tranquility you mention was always there. So peaceful too.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Cowboy! :)
Cow dung and green grass, smells like synergy. Haha
Thanks for sharing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thsnk you for the read and review

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you for the insight

[mattavelli]

My pleasure, I'm full of it. Haha

[Poetic Beauty]

The poem has a peaceful feeling making the reader think of the green pasture rather than all the other stuff

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Dale... I will lie down in green pastures... someday with
Elsie, a well known Cow. I will drink from the River of Life.
His Rod and Staff will Comfort me... Yea though I walk through the Valley...
I will be at Peace. truly, Pat... Amen

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen and thank you for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Cows, serene people, everyday life....all rolled into one shining poem.
I love cows, have since I was little, visiting Vermont and the farms...
they are so peaceful...and maybe dumb, but maybe they just know their duty and their fate and are resigned to it.
the grass is always greener, and the cows of more vibrant color in the next pasture.
Life is like that for us too often. We aren't peaceful like them, we want what we don't have and are Bullish on getting it.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for that in deepth review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your poetry, my friend. It is always a lift for me to read you and smile.
j.