"Just Bring It!!"

"Just Bring It!!"

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Not my most artistic, this is a challenge to the coward in the cafe that seems to have a problem with me but doesn't have the nerve to say it to my face, you know who you are.

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Oh my look at you

No wait I can’t

Cause you hide behind accounts

As fake as breasts in Hollywood.

To what, taunt and trash me behind my back,

And you have the nerve to call me coward.

 

Man you’re like a bad storyline

From that old T.V. Show “Dallas”.

 

Not that I care if you don’t like me

It’s the way you go about it.

 

My only wonder is your motive…

Pure jealousy or complete stupidity?

 

I’m daring you know to come out

From the shadows then we’ll see

Just what you’re made of.

 

Of coarse if I was a gambling man

I’d bet that you won’t.

 

So what do you say my spineless friend,

Got the guts to come out and play?

 

Hey I’m right here waiting

With one simple message…

 

“Just bring it!!”

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


Author's Note

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
Not my most artistic, this is a challenge to the coward in the cafe that seems to have a problem with me but doesn't have the nerve to say it to my face, you know who you are.


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Bitter, patient-less. I liked the piece because it's so honest and blunt. Well done!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well...OK! Have no idea who or what but hope you find out and "fix" the problems. Still a pretty good write for being a "challange" I liked the part, "So what do you say my spinless friend,
Got the guts to come out and play". Good luck. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hah, oh man happens to all of us here at some point or another dont it?
gah.

look at this:
I'm daring you know(now?) to come out

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh honey I have absolutely no problem whatsoever telling you to your face that I have a problem with you. Now if I could only find your face...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

It doesn't have to be artistic it is what it is and you have to stand up for yourself. Cowards always loose in the end anyway!

Brette

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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JC
Sad that you had to post this, but a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do!

Keep the faith, you only have to answer to yourself.

JC

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow... that just says it all...


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow a challange....very nice. very nicely written. u expressed yourself and what you needed to be said.

"DAMN THE MAN" hehe who ever it is....shouldnt be playin games.just get it over with...be cool

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You tell 'em Cowboy! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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