The Earthly ztruth

 

When you captivate

An audience of rocks

You have polished

Your ability

To be your true self.

 

That is when

Facing the wind

Is how you catch your breath

And the sun has to put on

Its sunglasses.

 

Look at the round of applause

From the soil rooting you on

Making your Mother Nature so proud

That all the flowers

Become a bouquet

That will never die.

Reviews

[lightsong]

as I was reading this, I was reading it with a loud voice inside me, there is a certain power flows within your words here, "all for one and one for all" this what I think about after finished reading, really special and beautiful one my friend,

" And the sun has to put on
Its sunglasses"

couldn't help smiling to your own personal touch of humorous sense :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much. I am flattered by your review.

[emmajoy]

'.. true self. ~ That is when ~ Facing the wind ~ Is how you catch your breath. '

Each brief stanza is a masterpiece and, when read aloud, each stanza makes music. To be honest this could, after many years of reading your poems, be my favourite! Your thoughts put to paper, so to speak, remind one that Mother Nature creates lifelong memories of beauty. bouquets and even, for me, delightful wee bunches. Beautiful. Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you classy lady for that sweet review,

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful Dale and so visual. A round of applause from me also. Nature never ceases to amaze.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh my, Cowboy....the best audience...and from the trees, always a standing ovation.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like be the last stanza. We need to appreciate ourselves a little more often.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much