Her Perfect Paradise

Her Perfect Paradise

 

 

Rose petals fall like tears

But the flower still stands strong.

With this garden

As her sanctuary 

She knows that

The sad beauty

Will find its purpose

Under the sun.

 

The soil continues

To be its strength

And the sun rays

It’s eternal hope.

But the rain

That comes and goes

Is the key

To her success.

 

The Garden of Eden 

May be

The first paradise

PerfectFor the Gods,

But this quaint 

Little garden

Is The perfect

Paradise for her.

 

Reviews

[Ankita Dwivedi]

One can find happiness in the slightest of things , you have crafted this paradise with care , one even i would want to stay in . Amazing poetry , my friend .
with love , Ankita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Ankita Dwivedi]

your welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, beautiful and wonderful words shared my friend. I loved the complete poem and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you as well for sharing your wonderful talent

[barleygirl]

Nicely composed to show that the garden can be a place where we find sanctuary, as well as a place we can bury our sorrows. I love the way your message shows the highs AND lows of a sacred scene -- all moods make it the completeness you convey (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so muchh for thay lovely review