The Primaries Of Life

 

 

Those red drops

That you see

That looks like

Blood on the pathway

Is really

The Yellow brick road

In disguise.

 

If you can endure

The journey

That long road

Takes you on

You will find utopia

In the form of

A blue sky

Where black is white

And white is black.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

yeah ... some day eh!? not a believer in an Earth bound utopia; but worthwhile struggles, as history proclaims, are won with blood and fire. Of the mind and soul or in reality ... if we would only https://youtu.be/ftE8vr0WNus
we can all do better can't we Cowboy? really like how your poem says it sir .. thanks for sharing
E.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this inspirational poem. Keep going and the red droplets will turn to the yellow brick path.

Love the imagery and uplifting feel of this poem. Well done Dale

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad to see you are still writing. Keep up the amazing work.

[barleygirl]

Interesting tangle of primary colors. You make "primary" feel multi-layered & complex. I esp love "tallow brick road" (thought-provoking). Thanks for sharing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thabk you kindly

[lightsong]

"Is really
The tallow brick road
In disguise."

that was clever and creative! our red drops but pavers of the road to the state of achievement, whatever that achievement is.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[John the Baptist]

The road may be a difficult one, but in reality it is the path to peace. If you can walk it and not lose faith, you will find it takes you to where you have wanted to go all along. A sound philosophy, one appropriate for the time in which we are living.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are so correct

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“You will find utopia
In the form of
A blue sky
Where black is white
And white is black.”
Yes you are so right Dale. Utopia, and everything else, are all a matter of perception and colors are ever-changing in the mind’s eye. You’ve captured it so well here. I, for one, am still searching...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"the ink is black, the page is white, together we learn to read and write"
what a beautiful sight if we can get to that utopia.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like that.
Thank you Jacob

[MomzillaNC]

"Where black is white
And white is black"

Love that turn of phrase.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I'm glad to hear that/ Yhank you.

[MomzillaNC]

YVW 👍🏻