Universal Lessons

I asked Patria to tell me what subject she wanted me tp write a senryu about. She said the comet or eclipse. I decided to do both.

Eclipse

 

Every now and then

The sun and moon will align

To teach the humans.

 

 

Comet

 

That streak that you see

Coming across the dark sky.

Is a glimpse at life.

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the depth of thought behind these simple-seeming sentiments! Very probing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again. for all of your reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Dale, yours are such perfect Haiku verses possessing a concise brevity and breathtaking beauty that wonderfully encompasses the moon, stars and universe... Stellar write my friend!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. Rdgar Allan Crow thanks you too.

[emmajoy]

In thirty four superbly created words you have created beauty and more, Dale. Plus, achieved what was suggested: each senryu is wonderful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much classy lady

[Seriana]

Beautiful in the expanse of the universe in such brief pieces. Lovely Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much

[Poetic Beauty]

The universe showing us what it can do and simply how amazing it is

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it certainly is

[Patricia]

well done my friend! I really love them both. I am dealing with writers block right now and can't write anything but here you are giving the universe your mark!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. really glad you like them