A Poem Within A Poem

A Poem Within A Poem

 

March 13^th 2021

 

Fantasy and reality collide

On a blank page

When my mind

Is hopped

Up on creativity juices.

 

When the word starts to free flow

Like wine

All bets are off

When it comes

To proper form because

Even when my sentences are wrong

They are still (write).

 

My wisdom is enlightened

No matter the complexity of my subject.

I am a genius in my creative world.

 

The beauty lies in the fact that

Even when my thoughts are

straight forward

They could have different meanings to all.

And best of all my work is good

No matter the opinions of others.

Reviews

[Seriana]

Dale. I've known you a very long time and dare I say this may likely be the best of yours I've read, my friend!! Bravo! Not only was the message a slam dunk, you have alot of playfulness and word fun going on there that made this just the "write" amount of everything. WELL DONE!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again. Your reviews are making my day.

[lightsong]

every one write with their own style my friend, You chose what You are comfortable with and what express You the best, of course if we are going to take our writing for another level "professional" we are now talking about something else :) though I like all your sincere thoughts here but this captured my mind,
"Even when my thoughts are
straight forward
They could have different meanings to all."

because it's very ture, how our readers also interpret differently while reading our words and may even find things we didn't notice about our writing, and then it comes "a poem within a poem" :)

all the best my friend, stay creative and keep writing 💕

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for that indepth review.

[lightsong]

so welcome You are my friend💕

[Yellow Butterfly]

You are a great poet and this is evident in this incredible write which sums up my thoughts too. Poetry is all about self expression ....to some yes..there is a right way ...to 'us' only we know what's on our minds and in our hearts to enable us to 'write' our way. Keep writing :)

This is my favourite of yours 100/100

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. Sorry for the elay. I somehow missed it untill now.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

You are a very creative poet, Cowboy. And everyone has an opinion...
I have been on sites, especially one many years ago, where fledgling poets got ripped by so-called critics, masters of the craft...they discouraged many of those writers to give up...
Just because those poets didn't write like the others.

Poetry is a blend of many different types of voices and forms...and they all matter.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said Jacob. Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

We are our own masters of our craft and each piece is unique to us

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes we are. Thank you.

[John the Baptist]

A single roll makes up for a lot of ruts. Hold to it as long as you can.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LOL, athank you.