Sweet Memories Are Only In My Dreams

  

Dreaming of memories

that never really happened

as I’m delightfully haunted

by the ghostly touches

I’ve longed for you to give.

 

Often I find myself

inside in another world

wrapped in your thighs

that inspires my fantasy

of dying with a smile.

 

Your lips are the gold

at the end of a rainbow

as I feel like the riches man

feeling them lock into

a single breath with mine.

 

I wish upon a shooting star

that is your tender arms

when wrapped around me

make me feel like I’m flying

among the heavenly bodies.

 

So again tonight I a wait

for sleep to arrive knowing

I’ll be happy and sad

dreaming of memories

that never really happened.

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Extremely well written- the concept- everything about this writing is written to height
I felt the images to possess that certain shade of midnight blue-magic's passionate shade
this is masterful work-in my honest opinion something like this should be booked
and sold. what i like is the way your words end and create the next scene playing
off the previous line break-I style i've come to favor- romance to sweep a woman's hearts.

[Victoria Lee~]

This is fantastic. It seems while I was away your work picked up a beautiful melancholy twist to it with a longing for someone...Whatever it is, it is fantastic... : )

[Jazmyne]

wow....this is a powm that actually made me smile yet feel sad....it sucks when you want someone you dont or cant have.
I wish upon a shooting star
that is your tender arms
when wrapped around me
make me feel like I'm flying
among the heavenly bodies.

i really liked that part of the poem. i love your work...i say that all the time...your amazing!!

[TL Boehm]

interesting mix in this one, it is almost wistful in spots...but I had to smile at the concept of dying with a smile...
Nicely done, gentle dreamfilled poetry.

[Dani California]

as I'm delightfully haunted
by the ghostly touches
I've longed for you to give

Wow. And ... ouch.

Very touching and beautiful poem. The ones we want but cannot have.... been there done that, as have many. I think all of us actually, can relate to this.

Awesome work. I love reading you :)

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Beautifully written piece, Dale. A very sweet write, I enjoyed this read. Marvelous, dear.

~*Anna Rose*~

[Jane Doe]

This is a wonderful poem. It flows so well. It is hauntingly sad and so well written. Thanks for sharing.