Without A Word

Eye to eye

across the room

mysterious intentions

but captures my interest

all the same.

 

Hand to hand

we start to explore

dangerous curves

ignoring warning signs

“Slippery when wet”

 

Lip to lip

it gets more personal

tasting sweet bliss

the nectar tingles

running down my chin.

 

Breath to breath

it’s like CPR

yet we both drown

in the inescapable emotions

as the dam breaks

 

Body to body

we crash into each other

with uninhibited force

powerful enough

to stop a speeding bullet.

 

Heart to heart

mine explodes

watching you walk away

knowing for you

this was the only time.

 

Without a word

this night has now become

a blessing and a curse.

Reviews

[Dani California]

Heart to heart
mine explodes
watching you walk away
knowing for you
this was the only time

Although this is a sexy piece, my mind stuck on this part. It hurt.

You did a fantastic job with the passionate, sexy, lustful aspects of this write, however to me the only thing that really matters.... is the heart. Giving yourself fully to someone and then they're gone, taking a piece of you with them leaving behind an emptiness. Powerful!

Gosh, I hope I didn't go too far and make this a downer! LOL I think too damn much...

It's hot, it truly is. But even more so, it's sad.

Excellent work sweets :)

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a very passionate poem, and you do a good job converying that.
However, this line : Breath to breath

it's like CPR I felt didn't mingle well with the rest of the
stanza. It seemed out of place. The same thing goes for this
line:
powerful enough

to stop a speeding bullet.
I just didn't feel those words were connecting.

AD

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Marvelous, sexy piece. You had so many great lines in this I don't know which to choose for my favorite. So I'll just say I love 'em all. Excellent work, Dale. ;)

~*AnnaRose*~

[Wildfleour]

I love the last line = ain't that the truth!!!!!!!!!!! :)

[Erotic Goddess]

Body to body

we crash into each other

with uninhibited force

powerful enough

to stop a speeding bullet.

One night of passion, devotion, and fireworks and then, it's all over, just like that, moments in time that pass us by. This was seductive and sensual. I enjoyed it.

Love,
Stephanie

[Jessi]

Great write, wonderful imagery,and very passionate I love it

[Michael X]

dale, this poem was a pleasure to read-in way of
wording expressing images that bring sensual to the
night, very passionate, and well written,
sculpted to masterpiece erotic projections, nicely done
Your words stand out with vividness

[Jenny Davis]

I like how you painted this brief encounter, it wasn't cheap or raunchy...tender and hot, nice job :)

[Jazmyne]

wow i really liked this one! it gave a good image of the way the night was very passionate....but the sucky part was that you will never again to that with that person. one night stands can be fun...but it sucks when there is a connection with that person. anywayze....very nicely written!!

Great write about a one night stand! Like the flow! Just love the passion!