Celestial Connection

 

 

The deep navy sky takes the form

of infinite possibilities as I watch

the twinkle of the heavenly bodies

staring deep within my soul.

 

This inner connection with them

was written long before birth

for just like their celestial journey

my humanity is from here to eternity.

 

So as I wish upon a star that might have

burned up hundreds of years ago

my love and faith will shine long after

I am called beyond this atmosphere.

Reviews

[Dani California]

May our spirits live forever more.... and they will because we are all of one spirit.

This is beautiful and powerful! We are connected to all that exists, now and forever, yet we feel separated most of the time. Though, only because we choose it that way.

Great work! Definitely a favorite cowboy :)

[Gandré]

sweetie, Dale, wonderul - totally enchanting !
love it ! send more.

[Wildfleour]

Wonderful, Cowboy. I feel the same way. I am connected and I hope that I leave something behind that will connect me forever to this Earth, as well.

Just so you know - the "type" was a bit hard to read.

[Rain]

This is a great insightful and philosophical poem. It has a beauty to it, in thyat you talk about the eternalness of our spirit. Great write. Rain..

So beautiful! I think this is a great poem! What a way to connect with stars!

[Jazmyne]

very deap and full of imagination. your words are one of a kind! it took me to another place.....very well written...!

[Kelly D. Burris]

Beautiful and breathtaking! You have such a way with words, my friend.


my love and faith will shine long after

I am called beyond this atmosphere.

I really like the ending. :)
Kelly

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Marvelous, Dale. Reading this beautiful piece of yours just takes my breath away. Beautiful.


~*AnnaRose*~