In The Rain

Rain is so romantic

  

When I see your face in the rain

it is more mesmerizing then

a rose covered in morning dew

with your natural beauty

making nature green with envy.

 

When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight.

 

When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire.

 

When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island.

 

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven

bringing new life to my lonely planet.

 

Author's Note

The rain is so romantic

Reviews

[Dani California]

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven
bringing new life to my lonely planet.

Very sensual, romantic write. There is something about the rain and water in general that can be so exotic and passionate. But beyond that, rain being the metaphor for love and passion as two spirits and bodies connect, washing away the loneliness..... is penned beautifully

.. as always

[Janice Ann]

BRING ON THE RAIN! Ummm....this was a yummy romantic piece, I that the words and the images were beautiful~ thanks for that...Man, it makes me want it to rain! MMM yeah!

Loved it!
Janice Ann

[~crazy Beautiful~]

i love this dale, every word, every feeling
beautiful

[Natalie C]

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven
bringing new life to my lonely planet.

Beautiful!!!

Dale this truly was a sensual treat, so romantic, so perfect. I am sure no women would be able to resist such a amazing piece. Your imagery seemed to strengthen flow of the piece perfectly. Words dripping from the page just emphasizing the brilliance and tender emotions with which this was written

Loved it, once again!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i do enjoy the rain (on most occassions - sometimes it literally makes my head hurt)
this is a fantastic piece - very lovely

[Belinda Rice]

this touched my heart.....


When I see your face in the rain

it is more mesmerizing then

a rose covered in morning dew

with your natural beauty

making nature green with envy.



When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight



this is just lovely........


When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight.



When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire.



When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island.

you wrote a very strong poem and ver passionate,and sweet great write

[Carrie Montgomery]

ahhh yes...the rain IS romantic! Very nicely done. It is raining here, as a matter of fact.

[Mariah]

yes it is. !
i would love to make love in a downpour. !
beautiful write.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Romantic and simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Fantasyfairy]

I love the sound of the rain and the smell. A romantic wonderful poem. XX