In The Rain

Rain is so romantic

  

When I see your face in the rain

it is more mesmerizing then

a rose covered in morning dew

with your natural beauty

making nature green with envy.

 

When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight.

 

When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire.

 

When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island.

 

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven

bringing new life to my lonely planet.

 

Author's Note

The rain is so romantic

Reviews

[Dani California]

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven
bringing new life to my lonely planet.

Very sensual, romantic write. There is something about the rain and water in general that can be so exotic and passionate. But beyond that, rain being the metaphor for love and passion as two spirits and bodies connect, washing away the loneliness..... is penned beautifully

.. as always

[closed account]

Yes the rain is so very romantic as the others said well!! I love to dance in the rain, since Southern Cali doesnt see much of it!! well we have recently more than the past!! but his was full of passion, the ending lines gave me goose bumps... greatness..

[Gandré]

oh Dale, this was sweet and innocent......this makes me even.. sad.....
daily will the dawn arrive, fill your air with welcome light, your world
will wake to pleasant sights, not yet below the earth we lie.

[Sheila Kline]

The rain is indeed romantic....I could listen to it all day and night! It brings back fond memories of childhood to me as I would hear it hit a tin roof. In Washington state there is much rain, and I never grew tired of it....we just walked without umbrellas as we were so used to it. It is cleansing and has such a peaceful sound!
Beautiful write Dale....I really like this one, as I love rain!!

[Ralphy]

I would agree, rain is romantic, that is what drives me to the beauty of it. I can remember each drop, millions of them collecting on me with her in the rain...awe the thirst for the rain.

[ANNA]

awwww I wish it was raining right now from reading this. You have a great wave to your words. The flow and the rhymes heal my trouble soul! Loved this piece. gorgeous write!

Anna

[J.Black]

"When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island."


Sigh the rain! We had a discussion about this. Ah it is TRULY beautiful. Very romantic indeed. Thanks for the request, I enjoyed it!

[Bonnie]

Beautiful use of words, imagery and emotion!

[Angelic Darkness]

You are right, rain is so romantic, sensual. This is a beautiful piece.
My favorite lines are: When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine
When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire

AD

[bluessadmood]

this is nice and romantic ,i wonder why the rain has got everything to do with love,and pain and sadness and most emotions,this is brilliant work ,i just loved it

[emmajoy]

What can I add to whatever's been said ..
'Most impressed with what I've just read.
Your words, romantic, passionate - beautifully penned.
Thank you for sharing, very skilled friend.