Beauty Of The Moon

just a quick thought in my head

  

The lunar glow of midnight

 

reflects serenity 

 

off a river of tears.

 

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

The lunar glow of midnight



reflects serenity



off a river of tears.

isent this the truth you have been writing little ones lately i hope your doing ok but good write I can tell you that cause its the truth it can be a reflection of all kinds of things if you think hard enough.......belinda

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haunting, how the night brings all things to the surface..and reflects back our fears..nice

[Adelia Alighieri]

Just the words 'lunar glow', 'serenity' and 'river of tears' collects all the perfection of the world in this piece.
Going in my favorites + a 101/100

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When I read this I get a picture of a woman standing in the moonlight and the tears are flowing like a river down her cheeks. This is a sad lil poem, but beautiful

[Tina Kline]

Those three lines create a very beautiful picture yet with a touch of sadness. Love this.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

thought provoking - short but packs a punch... great job

[Jane Doe]

Short but sweet. I always love poems about the moon. I really liked this piece.

[O!]

lovely thought....paints a picture!

x,
O!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Laura Sparkle]

awww. so much meaning in these short lines.

[Lyra H]

Nicely done!