Sexploration

just a bit of sexy fun that is out of this world

Pulses like rocket ships

Carrying inhibitions

To another world.

Leg open like a gateway

To the milky way.

Three-two-one

We have ignition.

 

Boosters on full blast

Leaving the atmosphere

Desire in full throttle.

Engines almost overheat

Pistons are firing

At an orgasmic rate.

 

Seeing stars up close

As you feel their heat

Mission almost complete.

Shuttle makes its final thrusts

Giving off heated buildup

And prepares for decent.

 

Back to earth landing safely

Two astronauts enjoying the effects

Of their trip to heaven.

No time to rest

As they begin training

For the next mission

 

Countdown begins…

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

You just have a way with this type of write. I always enjoy your "Just a little something" 's You are always a pleasure to read and have your words swim around for a bit in my head. I think you have found something that you both enjoy to write about and do it with such a flare that makes it stick in your head.



Great Job!!!!!!

[Seriana]

How fun! What a brilliant way to write about THAT!!! I loved every second of it. :)

[Carrie Montgomery]

a fun read. your play on words,as always, were very clever and humorous.

[Lorraine Pearson]

I find so much humor here! (on many levels!) You did a fabulous job penning this and paralleling the space exploration to bedroom events. Its a lot of fun!
~Lorraiyne

[Inda Lauryn]

Sexy without being unnecessarily graphic. I love the metaphors here.

[Gary H]

So you are taking us to another galaxy! Enjoyed this, it floats around leaving me thinking and knowing what you mean and cleverly doesn't delve into crudity. Think you did very well in not mentioning a rocket ship entering a black hole.......

[Flow]

You know I can relate to this poem, I loved it and it was a nice trip to space and back! Well done and creative it was~

[Adel Eyes]

nice job cowboy

well written

[Antony]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!, cracking up at this, really a good write Dale, I loved it. excellent my friend, quite clever, see you on the next shuttle. lol
Tony

This is good! Like the imagery! I liked how you mixed sex with space. Great write!