This was really beautiful Dale, not at all something I would expect a cowboy to write - ha ha
But seriously, what a wonderful piece. Loved your imagery and the peacefulness which came seeping from your piece almost makes me want to believe too.
Very inspirational, think this could lift even the heaviest of souls right now.
Very inspirational Dale!! You could up with the most amazing poems. That should be quoted in books!! Why aren't you writing your own book!!! lol Perfect write. You always made me believe when I'm down and out!
I have missed coming by and reading your work.....this was exceptionally good. Hope your holiday is not a lonely one. Take care and come by some time! Cheers,lea
Your words are very true here. Belief is a powerful thing in face of hard times and trouble. It's easy to forget dreams when you're worrying about health or paying bills. This is a nicely written, peaceful reminder not to lose hope. Thank you for sharing this one :)
This is very spiritual, well wrought. I feel the aura of serenity ebbed in these wonderfully penned words.
"Release your inner faith into the unpredictable winds
As it soars onward toward the wild blue yonder
Not letting the gravity of others crash it into the ground."
~ A great depiction of the verse, "...for we walk by faith, not by sight." Nicely done.
Now that was down right Yeehaw!
A wonderful poem of beauty, integrity and the strength of belief.
Faith in our selfs and the almighty are powerful things when our hearts are guided with kindness and truth.
very inspirational. love the way you weave your words. I think sometimes poems fall into your lap when you need to hear a message. Thanks for the message of hope.
i think this is a strong invitation to live ,to hope ,to have faith in everything ,though lots around you are not to be trusted ,but open up ,feel no fear,have strength in your faith, love everything and everyone,give love a chance to dwell in a heart where its warm,open up shed your fears away,if you really believed ,this is a strong invitation to life to love ,to feel goodness everywhere,to have faith ,to smile at life and all ,you will feel all different ,its lovely ,these words full of life ,i just loved every word in it
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..