Through Your Eyes

  

Through my eyes I can see

all the beautiful colors

the world has to offer me

from the life giving green

of a new born leaf

to the mysterious blue

of heaven’s floor.

Through your eyes they become

a three dimensional

priceless piece of art.

 

Through my eyes I notice

all the animals of the world

as such caring creatures

that enjoy every breath

and the simple pleasures

they are given.

Through your eyes you see

every beat of their hearts

as a sweet love song.

 

When I see a baby

I see new life,

you see the future.

 

When I see a good deed

I see compassion,

you see humanity.

 

Oh how I’d love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

wow this was beautiful this is my favorite one of them all.....this is my part that i really love about it....


Oh how I'd love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.


its so senceual and sweet and it shows that through your eyes you want what life has to offer you for love in eturnity.....you bring this poem out to be one of the most wonerful love poems i have seen ...great job on your poem i hope to keep seeing more......pen very well ......

[Ladysue]

wow, this was an incredibly beautiful piece. The last stanza is exquisite and my favorite. The entire piece is full of great interpretation and realization. Excellently done!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Stunning thoughts - masterfully penned. Thank you - great depth of spirit here.
Light,
Siddartha

[Kara Emily Krantz]

wow, dale. that is really really impressive. i think this is the best piece (or at least, MY favorite) of yours.... it's so... human, so real, so gentle... and a lovely piece of poetry.

couple typos: (cuz thats what i do) lol


from the LIFE- giving green


Through your eyes THEY become




every beat of THEIR hearts


"When I see a good deed

I see compassion,

you see humanity."

- no typo there - i just think it's gorgeous :)




"Oh how I'd love to see myself
through your eyes
just so I can see
the man I am and the man I want to be."

You set that ending up SO well - the way it flowed from the beginning, building.. .with examples, and then you bring it back to the self, the home... that was really beautifully done.

I adore this piece my dear.