Through Your Eyes

  

Through my eyes I can see

all the beautiful colors

the world has to offer me

from the life giving green

of a new born leaf

to the mysterious blue

of heaven’s floor.

Through your eyes they become

a three dimensional

priceless piece of art.

 

Through my eyes I notice

all the animals of the world

as such caring creatures

that enjoy every breath

and the simple pleasures

they are given.

Through your eyes you see

every beat of their hearts

as a sweet love song.

 

When I see a baby

I see new life,

you see the future.

 

When I see a good deed

I see compassion,

you see humanity.

 

Oh how I’d love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

wow this was beautiful this is my favorite one of them all.....this is my part that i really love about it....


Oh how I'd love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.


its so senceual and sweet and it shows that through your eyes you want what life has to offer you for love in eturnity.....you bring this poem out to be one of the most wonerful love poems i have seen ...great job on your poem i hope to keep seeing more......pen very well ......

[Jenny Davis]

Oh, gosh...what to say first...The ending gave me chills, wow!
I love LOVE this line:
"to the mysterious blue

of heaven's floor".........that is just too creative and beautiful!
You my friend have outdone yourself here and I think she already has you reflected as someone awesome :)

[DrumMajorPod]

Wow.. that was a really impressive piece. It really has a forced direction, and it was highly enjoyable to read. Excellent work!

[desertraven]

Oh, I really like this. Really a beautiful piece.
Sandra

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Oh how I'd love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.

[Gary H]

Definately one for the ladies (as O says). There is a great feeling of the closeness of a male and female when reading this. I find it very hard to write in a consistently light tone and think you have done a great job on this here. The uncomplicated language also shows a really caring feel to the poem. Great write.

[Brette Medb]

The ending was so poetically beautiful. At first I thought you had made a mistake with the title when you started off talking about seeing through your own eyes but then I loved the progression to her eyes. Great write.


Brette

[O!]

You are definitely going to get adoration from every woman who reads this.

Very well thought out and so romantic.

x,
O!

[Candle in the wind]

This is breathtakingly beautiful! Thats all I can say.

[Robert Luna]

What a wonderful piece to read on Earth Day made my heart happy and placed a smile upon my face. Beautifully done my friend. Truly a wonderful heartfelt piece of work here. Sorry took me a while to get to this. Lost my modem Thurs night and was not able to really do anything online until now. I liked the feeling this gave me and the peaceful thoughts it shared.

Great Job!!!!!!

[MorganLyn]

ooo me love this poem! People normally see us better than we see ourselves. We're all self critics.
wonderful job!