Through Your Eyes

  

Through my eyes I can see

all the beautiful colors

the world has to offer me

from the life giving green

of a new born leaf

to the mysterious blue

of heaven’s floor.

Through your eyes they become

a three dimensional

priceless piece of art.

 

Through my eyes I notice

all the animals of the world

as such caring creatures

that enjoy every breath

and the simple pleasures

they are given.

Through your eyes you see

every beat of their hearts

as a sweet love song.

 

When I see a baby

I see new life,

you see the future.

 

When I see a good deed

I see compassion,

you see humanity.

 

Oh how I’d love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

wow this was beautiful this is my favorite one of them all.....this is my part that i really love about it....


Oh how I'd love to see myself

through your eyes

just so I can see

the man I am and the man I want to be.


its so senceual and sweet and it shows that through your eyes you want what life has to offer you for love in eturnity.....you bring this poem out to be one of the most wonerful love poems i have seen ...great job on your poem i hope to keep seeing more......pen very well ......

[closed account]

really beautiful,,, I wish everyone could see the beauity through their own eyes!!
very nice........... :-)

[Kiara]

simply beautiful : )

[just is]

Wow! I just love the sincerity in this write, this is so beautiful and so sweet. You have a wonderful heart sweety

[Dezaraye]

This so, so beautiful. It's always a miracle to be able to see yourself through the eyes of someone you love. This piece is so incredible.

[Tara Jean Olson]

breathtaking! a favorite

[lilain]

Oh, how you've captured the want of a man in love. You're language is so tender and I love how it is in stark contrast with the previous poem I read (sorry, I don't remember the name).

I love this!!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i love that last part - thats great

overall fantastic piece - very enjoyable to read...

[Kelly D. Burris]

What a beautiful and intimate piece. You definitely feel a wanting to be connected feeling that is there. It's like something of a beautiful card for someone to give, who isn't as eloquent as you my friend.
Thanks for sharing!

[Larissa G.]

Such a beautiful flow that leads to a deep, pondering question of yourself at its end. I feel like some of the flow is off, but overall it is quite a lovely read.

[Winter McPherson]

Truly beautiful. Has such a cadence to it. Like a waltz, first seeing through your eyes then through hers(?). You've really outdone yourself with this one. The ending is lovely!