Lunar Music

                                                                                               

Every night when the city sleeps

Deep in your mind music plays.

Though very faint it is there

Giving a feeling that all is ok.

 

So many times you look to the sky

Swearing it rides down on moonbeams

And often when your look to the sky

You’re certain you see a piano and wings.

 

Every note beats with your heart,

Every chord at one with your soul

That this phantom song brings no fear

In fact you welcome the heavenly harmony.

 

As you go about your life blissfully unaware

This masterpiece is played by your guardian angel

To drown out the negative sounds of evil

That tempts your conscience and goodwill.

 

 

Author's Note

This is a piece inspired by the combination of Kelly D Burris' poem The Composer and the picture posted with this piece... I hope you enjoy it.

Reviews

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Sugar this is soooo awesome and I can just hear
this music play'n in the background....
http://www.fileden.com/files/2008/6/4/1944970/YirumaKissTheRain.mp3
You never cease to amaze me with your ever talented pen
and beautiful heart...
Hugs
Donna

[Astrid Hamilton]

...how did you know?
(smiles)
I haven't read above said poem by Kelly Burris,
but this is inspired by Judy Garland's Dorothy in 'The Wizard of Oz'

"...why...it's just like you could read what's inside of me..."

(yesterday.)

To look at the sky- for answers- since the beginning of whenever time began. I wonder if Adam did so
as to the curiousity of what and how deep a same (unaware) sacrifice was made for Eve
"conducted" from his rib.
I will have to look at your dear poet friend's work, then.
I like this poem and the image of looking up at the sky. I just did myself,
not for answers; not today at least; but feeling the calamity and serenity within myself and the nature of the forest around me.

Thank you for looking up for your readers.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

oh i enjoyed this one so much too - love the line towards the end about the gaurdian angel - fantastic piece

[Catrinka]

This is a great poem - I really enjoyed the imagery you used! And I loved the pic too- KUDOS!

[lavenderskye]

This leaves me with such a peaceful feeling like someone is watching over me I love the nite sky also As all the others have said I to think this is a great poem ,very powerful.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I enjoyed it much.. very much .. some beautiful images ... love music and the night so it is a fav for me .. i do think and i say this with much respect, your writing is getting so much stronger .. and it was to begin with but lately you have written some great pieces.
Chloe
xoxo

Love the title too..

[Vatsayayana]

I love this.
It brought about such pleasant memories for me.
With Spring slowly creeping up here at my home, I keep going outside at night.
Watching the moon, feeling the breeze.
And I keep listening, listening intently for the song of the crickets.
Of the Nighthawks as they make their tribute to the moon.
Such exquisite sounds. It makes me want to walk barefoot down a moonlit path and just absorb.
Truly beautiful work here sugar, I love it! :)

[Lillian]

Beautiful. This is very well done. Myself, being a lover of the night enjoy basking in the moonlight found a strong connection. =) I love how this became a spiritual sensation at the end. It's always nice to know someone's watching over you. Great write!

[Kara Emily Krantz]

"blissfully unaware" - i like that

"Every note beats with your heart,

Every chord at one with your soul"

there were many great lines within this piece. it is very soft, and gentle... and cradles the reader softly :)

[*** Hey Jude***]

The picture is a perfect visaul for the words that you have written so beautifully. Have you ever thought of putting your work to music? It flows so well ~ Judi :-)

[Aries]

This totally Rocks....You are full of Talent....Enjoyable....