Lunar Music

Lunar Music

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

                                                                                               

Every night when the city sleeps

Deep in your mind music plays.

Though very faint it is there

Giving a feeling that all is ok.

 

So many times you look to the sky

Swearing it rides down on moonbeams

And often when your look to the sky

You’re certain you see a piano and wings.

 

Every note beats with your heart,

Every chord at one with your soul

That this phantom song brings no fear

In fact you welcome the heavenly harmony.

 

As you go about your life blissfully unaware

This masterpiece is played by your guardian angel

To drown out the negative sounds of evil

That tempts your conscience and goodwill.

 

 

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


Author's Note

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
This is a piece inspired by the combination of Kelly D Burris' poem The Composer and the picture posted with this piece... I hope you enjoy it.

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Sugar this is soooo awesome and I can just hear
this music play'n in the background....
http://www.fileden.com/files/2008/6/4/1944970/YirumaKissTheRain.mp3
You never cease to amaze me with your ever talented pen
and beautiful heart...
Hugs
Donna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh this is so serenely beautiful, and I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the beautiful images you evoke here, and that otherworldly sense of protection. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the graphic and the words.
Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night when all should be peaceful, but the thought process continues. The song that only you can hear sets the mood and pace for the dream state and is often carried over into the waking hours. A harried and crashing cresendo creates chaotic moods, while the melodious tinkling of the ivory key in soft rythmn create a sense of peace and contentment. Kudos for creating a thought provoking piece of word artistry. As always an unusual writing from your pen.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this...the picture is perfect and only brings out the beauty of your words...I can hear the wonderful notes now...:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love the idea of this piece. A phantom in the night is your guardian angel guiding you through the dark.. Very nice. I think I'm going deaf or not listening might need to work on that lol

And did you mean played dear as opposed to This masterpiece is play by your guardian angel??????? :)

whoop whoop

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a great write. I can just hear the music! This created beautiful pictures in my mind as I read it. Wonderful and brilliantly written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sugar this is soooo awesome and I can just hear
this music play'n in the background....
http://www.fileden.com/files/2008/6/4/1944970/YirumaKissTheRain.mp3
You never cease to amaze me with your ever talented pen
and beautiful heart...
Hugs
Donna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautiful! I've never read the Burris piece but this was entrancing and delightful. Amazing job :]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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