Her Fiery Essence

Inspired by a delightful red head

From out of the sunset

a sensation came fourth

as a red headed stranger

sashayed up to my horse.

 

Her smile seductively sweet

with a hint of a wicked grin

awoke the devil on my shoulder,

even my angel was prepared for sin.

 

Her beauty had me mesmerized

and that hair lit up the sky

so without a glimpse of hesitation

I took her for a long ride.

 

As we set off to a destination unknown

I knew this was a distraction I caressed

with a mix of desired heaven in her kisses

and needed evil as I devour her luscious flesh.

 

Soon I lost command of my actions

while caught up in that sea of red

as she grabbed a leather strap

and tied me down to the bed.

 

She did things I never dreamed

dominating my internal animal

getting me to howl on command

as she rode with full control.

 

I watched this magnificent creature

rocking me to the bone

till all my lust passion and fury

was consumed by her fiery essence.

 

As we lay in the afterglow

I knew she was a force of nature

and to be caught in her storm

is a mix of pain and pleasure.

 

Before leaving I kissed her hand

she took my hat while grinning

and said “Oh sorry cowboy

I’m keeping this till our next encounter.”

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by friendly conversations between me and a friend here on the cafe Vatsayayana... so thank you my sweet vixen for your seductive inspiration.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

now you stand naked (no cowboy hat, I mean lol). Must have been some conversation here lol. At least you had some fun - and she didn't take your horse - well, yet anyway lol. *whispers to Vatsayayana "go for the horse!"* lol. This was a fun read for certain - and I can see you are back to your naughty self now.

*hugs*

laura

[Tania Leigh]

I'm thinking you didn't care about the hat after all that lol

Great, fun write here, and a killer title!

[Star-Runner]

This is cute, wonderfully written too.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

lol be careful for those online encounters my friend. read the trailer park hoochie and you will see why.
In any event it was nicely done i rather enjoyed it, and the humerous cowboy cliche images paint a funny picture.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You know what they say, Dale...

"Never underestimate the powers of a redhead...or was that a woman?"

[Robert Luna]

I really love the way you write and capture such a raw energy among your words. You tell a tale so vividly that anyone that reads your words is able to see them and feel them other than just read them. They do not remain just laying upon a page they take a life of their own. It is always a pleasure to read your words.


Well Done!!!!!

[Dani California]

Wow! That's all I can come up with at the moment... ;)

[Carrie Montgomery]

smokin'!
sensational write...nice tribute...or should I say naughty tribute?!?!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

oh boy you two have had some naughty conversations. nice twist at the end. a well written tribute to Vatsayana - hats off for her inspiration.


Great write.

[Adel Eyes]

You painted a picture of your subject and in my minds eye I could see her
and when I saw Vat's pic in her review I see that you discribed her
in beautiful detail.
Nice work