Her Fiery Essence

Inspired by a delightful red head

From out of the sunset

a sensation came fourth

as a red headed stranger

sashayed up to my horse.

 

Her smile seductively sweet

with a hint of a wicked grin

awoke the devil on my shoulder,

even my angel was prepared for sin.

 

Her beauty had me mesmerized

and that hair lit up the sky

so without a glimpse of hesitation

I took her for a long ride.

 

As we set off to a destination unknown

I knew this was a distraction I caressed

with a mix of desired heaven in her kisses

and needed evil as I devour her luscious flesh.

 

Soon I lost command of my actions

while caught up in that sea of red

as she grabbed a leather strap

and tied me down to the bed.

 

She did things I never dreamed

dominating my internal animal

getting me to howl on command

as she rode with full control.

 

I watched this magnificent creature

rocking me to the bone

till all my lust passion and fury

was consumed by her fiery essence.

 

As we lay in the afterglow

I knew she was a force of nature

and to be caught in her storm

is a mix of pain and pleasure.

 

Before leaving I kissed her hand

she took my hat while grinning

and said “Oh sorry cowboy

I’m keeping this till our next encounter.”

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by friendly conversations between me and a friend here on the cafe Vatsayayana... so thank you my sweet vixen for your seductive inspiration.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

now you stand naked (no cowboy hat, I mean lol). Must have been some conversation here lol. At least you had some fun - and she didn't take your horse - well, yet anyway lol. *whispers to Vatsayayana "go for the horse!"* lol. This was a fun read for certain - and I can see you are back to your naughty self now.

*hugs*

laura

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"Save a horse and ride a cowboy"

Nuf' said . . .

[Elliana]

Damn, can I meet her? lol

[NCPanthersgurl]

Hahaha, this is a really great poem. There's a very light pun in the "horse" and it makes me laugh.

Well written, it was definatley an interesting, and amusing, read =]

[Brenda Sue]

I love it. So playful and creative. Wonderfully penned.

[Lillian]

haha well done. this is a great write.
Oh how that Emmy has a way with her words.... lol

[Natalie C]

I don't even want to know what conversation the tow of you had ; ) but what ever it was, it must have been great to inspire a wonderfully entertaining piece like this.
Really had me smiling the whole way through, I specially loved the stanza;

Her smile seductively sweet
with a hint of a wicked grin
awoke the devil on my shoulder,
even my angel was prepared for sin.

[Gary H]

I've just watched the film 'Perfume' and am amused that the lead character was also inspired by a redhead for his creations and, in the end, his demise. Seems that your 'cowboy' had the same sort of encounter. Initially I had them as a knight and damsel in distress but I think when I reached the end I realised how mistaken I was!

Nicely done.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

what a great piece - nicely done :)

[Lorraine Pearson]

The fiery essence that stole your hat...my question is...is that all she stole--did she leave you wanting for more? :D
~L

[Fantasyfairy]

I bet the hat would look better on her anyway, lol. Nice conversation you guys must have had! XX