Moonlight Magic (My Shooting Star)

a repost

 The Moonlight caresses

that angelic face

and I pretend it’s my hand

as I realize you have

captured all that I am

and all that I want to be.

 

When your sweet kisses

Touch my lips

I feel the rain cleansing

all my troubles away.

The mere presence of

your being here

casts the sun of high noon

on the darkness in my soul.

 

You are the brightest star

hiding amongst the galaxy

afraid of the atmosphere’s pain.

But when your love is ready to fall

Just crash into the crater of my heart

And stay till the earth revolves no more.

Author's Note

A repost of one of my more popular ones.

Reviews

[Adel Eyes]

well written I liked it
butttttt...........
"You are the brightest star
hiding amongst the galaxy"

some how the word "amongst" did not read right for me

would you consider
hiding within the galaxy
or
hiding amongst the galaxies


and let me say you have some inspiration I hope it continues for you both

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This fantastic,
But when your love is ready to fall
Just crash into the crater of my heart
My head is still swooning. Written with so much passion and feelings. Make want to fall in love again.

[Wildfleour]

I can understand why this was popular. I adore it.

[Dani California]

Wow cowboy.. I could have sworn I reviewed this previously. It's wonderful! So romantic :)

You are the brightest star
hiding amongst the galaxy
afraid of the atmosphere's pain.
But when your love is ready to fall
Just crash into the crater of my heart
And stay till the earth revolves no more.


Awesome.

As always Cowboy, as always.

[Michael V]

Nice, a great "sweep me off my feet" feel.....Nice work.

[forfila]

This is awesome,,, deep and perfectly fitting the dialog intented (at least I think so)

Nice work!!!

Much admired indeed...