Karma Is A Prick

Inspired by this old pic I took

Sitting up on his throne

In the comfort of his home

When he felt a sudden pain

That resembles a touch of shame.

 

It started as a little prick

Then suddenly he felt sick

Cause his stomach began to ache

But a pooh he could not make.

 

Something was holding it in

Like a hypocrite hides their sins

In order to justify judgment

While preparing self armament.

 

It fills up his rear cavity

Without the help of gravity

Karma now becomes a giant prick

To such a big prick.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

If I were to wish karma on my enemies, constipation would be a good way to go! Since I eat lots of roughage (avid gardener!) I am lucky not to have the stubborn pricks, but I've been in an unhealthy place before, taking a ton of constipating pain pills (which I don't take anymore), & the word "PRICK" describes the sensation perfectly! It may be a big log up in there, but it feels like needles, like a prickly cactus. Clearly you've conjured up WAY TOO MUCH in my imagination & I better shut up before I'm guilty of TMI. This poem makes me want to go in a similar direction, except taking it to my usual blown-out ridiculousness for even more humor. V3, first couplet -- BRILLIANT! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Than k you so much... now you made me chuckle. I challenge you to take it to another level. I know you can do it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes there is a reason for constipation....and it can be stress...not only that we suffer, but perhaps the retaliation for the stress we put on others...karma comes around for sure.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very well said. Thank you for the feedback.