Dream And Believe (In Life's Dimensions)

  

Charcoal images take the form of 3-D

when your soul believes in things

the center of the eye cannot see.

Those colors shift into vivid images

of those childhood fantasies

that allows crystal clear waters

to break through the psychological dam.

The sudden rush flows through the veins

cleansing the ashes from a tangled soul.

Faith is finally free to roam and flourish

on the sacred land of golden hay.

The fault line to your soul shifts the ground

and the sand of time begins to fall

the way nature always foretold.

Rain washes over the foundation

and fills the vacant cracks with

the missing nutrients to make life healthy.

In the blink of an eye the colors of life

turn into the rainbow path of eternal euphoria

and now those childhood dreams

don’t seem so foolish after all.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Very well written piece of work here. I love how you are able to express yourself so perfect that any one that reads your words is able to feel the emotion and strength of them. I always enjoy the thoughts that your words leave laying in my mind. I always appreciate being left to think and ponder.

Great Job!!!!!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I'm very impressed with this piece. So impressed, I can't find the words to review this.


Great Write!
Rayne

[Natalie C]

**** Bravo ****
*Standing ovation*

Dale I will have to salute you on a brilliant masterpiece. This has to be the best piece I have read from you till thus far and I have to admit, it left me speechless!!!!
Amazing imagery and magnificent metaphors added to its brilliance. It flowed perfectly and carries a message so deep that one can't help but to sit back for a moment to reflect on everything said here.

To dream is good, sometimes I think that is what keeps us going....

I really loved this and it will def go into my favs.
Thanks you so much for sharing such a beautiful piece with me.

[Jenny Davis]

Dreams are NEVER foolish, even when we are children! This is a beautiful write :)

[musegirlsm]

Beautiful! I love this piece. Excellent imagery, style and content. There are too many favorite lines for me to quote here.

Great Write!

sandra

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this piece was by far the absolute best one of yours I have read, loved every word
my favorite part

The fault line to your soul shifts the ground

and the sand of time begins to fall

the way nature always foretold.


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[SM Davis]

Dale, I love how you described how our soul sees things our eyes don't. Our childhood dreams can be very powerful and you've displayed this so very well.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

fantastic piece... i really enjoyed reading this one...
love the last two lines... if you dream it -- why cant it come true... if you believe it enough... then you will make it happen...

Love it!!!