Dream And Believe (In Life's Dimensions)

  

Charcoal images take the form of 3-D

when your soul believes in things

the center of the eye cannot see.

Those colors shift into vivid images

of those childhood fantasies

that allows crystal clear waters

to break through the psychological dam.

The sudden rush flows through the veins

cleansing the ashes from a tangled soul.

Faith is finally free to roam and flourish

on the sacred land of golden hay.

The fault line to your soul shifts the ground

and the sand of time begins to fall

the way nature always foretold.

Rain washes over the foundation

and fills the vacant cracks with

the missing nutrients to make life healthy.

In the blink of an eye the colors of life

turn into the rainbow path of eternal euphoria

and now those childhood dreams

don’t seem so foolish after all.

Reviews

[closed account]

this was a very deep poem, I could tell that there is something personal
about it!! very good.

[☮]

Every time I read your work, I wind up saying, "The one is my favorite!"
I really enjoyed this. I actually sit and ponder these same exact thoughts. All of these beliefs that seemed so unimaginable are sometime what we need to continue in life and use as our driving force. I loved the pattern you have here.

You have some classic metaphors below that I was really impressed with. Great imagery. Deepness!

"Those colors shift into vivid images"
"The sudden rush flows through the veins"
"The fault line to your soul shifts the ground"
"Rain washes over the foundation
and fills the vacant cracks with
the missing nutrients to make life healthy."

[Gypsy_Moon]

What a captivating write. I was spell bound from the start...imagery ...SUBERB in every sense of the word....found this to be a most enjoyable read. Gyspy_Moon

[just is]

Wow! Dale, this is so wonderful and so beuatiful.
It's very descriptive. Lovely write.
Can image the whole write.
This is one of my faves from you.

[Fran Marie]

Those colors shift into vivid images

of those childhood fantasies

that allows crystal clear waters

to break through the psychological dam.

The sudden rush flows through the veins

cleansing the ashes from a tangled soul.



Wow!! This is fantastic writing~ you write prose as well as rhyme

captivating the reader with your vivid descriptives, I so love the line
"...Cleansing the ashes from a tangled soul~

WelL DonE I say~Fran

[Joanna Maharis]

Some very beautiful prose here.

[Ice QueenJen]

Another great from a fantastic writer!

Glad I took the time to read it to and it will go into my favorites.

[Courtney]

i'm adding this to my library! you are awesome.

[Brianna Brie]

Charcoal images take the form of 3-D
when your soul believes in things
the center of the eye cannot see.
Faith is finally free to roam and flourish
on the sacred land of golden hay.

Superb write! Love your unusual use of word combination. You have brilliantly described the indescribable. Well done...

[Seriana]

Wow Dale! This is a bit different from your norm, but I love it! The imagery was fantastic, and combined with the spiritual, this was quite superbly done. I love it! Thanks for the read. :)