Promises In Your Dream

 

When the day

Turns to night

And the stars

Seem too far

Remember the promises

Made in your dreams

So I can lay them

To rest,

Then they can be

Refreshed enough

To make the journey

Through the light

Of reality.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh wouldn't it be wonderful to make those dreams a reality Dale? Like the contrast between darkness and dreams and reality and light.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It would be wonderful... thank you.

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of the difficult balancing act it can be to feel the honesty of the darkness that can be so prevalent at times, and yet also believing in the light-centered possibilities that may exist beyond without really being able to define the promise or the dream. The challenge is to see the next assignment as the dream and the answer, rather than just another hurdle to endure (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

WOW, I really like seeing what it reminds me of.
Thank you for reading and sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if there is actually someone who can make dreams a reality...i want on board the train that will take me to that person...i'll pay double the fare to get there.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know right. I would too.