Grave Yard Wish

Grave Yard Wish

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Inspired by the Heroine Diaries by Nikki Sixx- reposted

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 Floating high above it all

I recognize everything,

Trying to figure out

What it all means.

The scene is chaotic

Distorted by flashing lights,

Tears wash the concrete

While screams cut the night.

A ghostly figure is motionless

But the spirit is still in hiding.

It’s all too familiar

Like something I wished,

Such a long time coming

But by no means shocking.

Such a bittersweet release,

A prayer finally answered

But thoughts start to betray,

To love myself now is futile

Cause time has no replay,

It’s now set in stone.

The light is so very bright

The closer to heaven I get,

A place I never thought I belong

Nor deserved to ever be.

Blurred my vision has become

As I awaken in my bed

Now I clearly see

What heaven means to me,

The sun peeking through the shades

And the birds singing away.

Millions of times I’ve woken

To a brand new day

Still the first time in my life

I’m glad to be alive.

© 2016 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Rocknrollcowboy,
Your poem, "Grave yard wish" is like a story with context and a positive ending. It even has a moral to it.
You are a witness to a death scene, "floating above,,lights flashing" to tears on pavement."
Death has visited; "figure motionless..spirit in hiding."
Acceptance in the dream of what is come. Death is the door to heaven, to peace and rest from the pain of life?, "Something I wished..long time coming.. no means shocking." then, "Prayer finally answered, bittersweet release."
Then the sobering reality of no going back. This was amazing! "Love myself is futile, time has no replay, now set in stone."
This is also incredible! "Light so very bright, closer to heaven I get, a place I thought I'd never get, never thought I'd belong nor deserved to ever be."
How thankful to just awake to a new day; and you surly have! "Blurred vision..as I awaken in my bed. Now I clearly see what heaven means to me."
Full wakefulness and continued life sings. "Sun peeking through the shades, and the birds singing away. Brand new day..Still the first time in my life I'm glad to be alive."
What inspiration I've received herein. This poem is a real thinker.
Bless you today and tomorrow.
Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Thank you for a wonderful and in-depth review, the poem was inspired by what I read about when Nikki.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

7 Years Ago

Rocknrollcowboy,
This poem of yours showed such amplified detail. I was so taken by it's real.. read more



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Beautiful poem. Wondering how it feels to be that glad to be alive? How lovely. XX

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful work dale
my favorite lines
Floating high above it all

I recognize everything,

Trying to figure out

What it all means.
nice work
" Floating high above it all

I recognize everything,

Trying to figure out

What it all means."
my only suggestion is to break up the format a bit
makes it more powerful
nice work
thank you for entering my contest


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

clap, clap, clap (not to be confused with the buggers)
well done a very nice read
ty

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Really enjoyed this, nicely done. Wonderfully written. Great imagery.


Great Write.
Rayne

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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