Spiritual Growth

a senryu

 

One foot in hell is

The seed that will allow me

To bloom in heaven.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You made me laugh my friend. The words are so true. I saw my foot in hell and I was trying to find the right places to be. A outstanding poem my friend.
Coyote

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Humm ... yes the polarity of heaven and hell summarised I a short sharp Senryu; Good one - only one observation - should in be 'allow' not 'allows' in the second stanza? Just a thought ... :-)

[MsJewel]

So much said in so few words :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you dear Julie.

[Cherrie]

Alright that was great, now I want to write one too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I enjoying trying to make my point in these small verses... I would love to read one from you.

[Cherrie]

Well this poem is very clever