Doesn't Make Cents

 

Blood money should be

Purchased on credit

Because layaway seems redundant

In a world where

Cash on delivery is

Always done a loan.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Caustic, strong and obviously felt! Life has become commercial, corrupt and unforgiving.. especially the last part, 'giving'

Your writing always has been sharp, honest.. this is not exception, Dale.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are the hard true and I agree my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great punch to this poem and skillful wordplay! "Cash on delivery" the phrase of the day! Love it.

[AYVID N]

A fast and upfront payment method is always appreciated hon. Nowadays that matters most and more than anything else. Always love your thoughts.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you hon... I cherish your opinions.

[AYVID N]

And I yours...

[Poetic Beauty]

Makes you think about corporate greed and corruption. Look at the diamonds in Africa. That's why people should buy non-conflict diamonds

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I agree whole heartedly. Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. You have been writing some great poetry

[barleygirl]

I'm no financial wizard, but I'll take your word for it! *wink! wink!* Always enjoy your word crafting & point of view!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly young lady.