Dreaming In Clear And Aqua

 

When a mist lingers

Like a breath mint

In Mother Earth’s mouth

The bubbling brook

Becomes cool enough

To refresh the throat

Of all whom believe

In the not so secrets

That nature speaks of.

So let those that think

The sun is the only light

Dry up like dead bugs

On asphalt during summer’s noon,

I choose to listen to the moist lips

Of Mother Nature at midnight.

Reviews

[Enchanted-Raven]

There is poetry in everything she has to offer, beautifully done :) x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly.

[Relic]

Perfect metaphors. Mother earth has so much to offer to those who appreciate her.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Indeed... so many don't realize the artwork that is Mother Nature.

[barleygirl]

I really love this one . . . I'm always in favor of raising awareness about how Mother Earth is urging us hapless humans to be more cognizant of what she needs to continue on in good health. Your metaphors are intensely-stated (breath mint, dried up bugs) & totally original. Good job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.., we certainly don't take good enough care of our Mother, and that makes it hard for her to take care of us.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

lately we have too much moisture on Mother Nature's lips...she is drowning us with wet kisses..

floods and more floods...
we need some dead bugs, and some sun.

very clever, the breath mints lines...

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir for sharing your thoughts.