The title is a flash of brilliance! To me, this is haiku becuz it's about nature (whereas senryu is about human nature) . . . but I still love the title becuz people interchange these words all the time. The most unusual part is the last line, as I had to think a bit to figure out why "shiny" . . .
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
You are right, but it could also be how you view the poem, Thank you so much for sharing your though.. read moreYou are right, but it could also be how you view the poem, Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Always appreciated.
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..