Lead On

 

When you’re standing in

Shadows at midnight

While the moon is new

There is very little light.

This is when the soul becomes

A star a billion miles away

Trying to hold tight to faith

With heartstrings that are frayed.

But the eyes only see

What is right in front of you

And the feet only go

The destinations you choose.

So trust in the Lord’s love

That’s never tattered or torn

For it will lead you

Past the devil’s horns.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Your messages are positive without being "preachy" -- very nice.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, glad it came off that way.

[Vaporvision]

Pretty poem with a good message. Albeit, every rose has it's thorns; the rhyming points were a bit odd to me. Nonetheless, god is great :)

[Ayvid N]

God never fails our trust. Great poem Dale. Appreciated so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you hon.

[Sami Khalil]

Trust in God and tie your camel tight. God is love and never runs out of it . A beautiful spiritual poem...:)............

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir....::::))))

[barleygirl]

This is beautifully stated & uplifting in an approachable way, rather than a preachy way. I love your imaginative comparisons to show us what the darkness can feel like & how the light can be found.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Was thank you BarleyClause... your review is a great Christmas gift.

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This is a beautiful poem about trusting God in leading you away from the darkness

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful cowboy. I've missed reading you!

Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you hon, and so nice to see you on the cafe.

[Corset]

In the day and age where faithlessness is "the in thing" this is a breath of fresh air, secretly I was hoping Miley and her tongue would find Canada, that alone would make this whole mess worth it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweetie... appreciate your thoughts.

[Sheila Kline]

It is this supreme love that shall get us through every dark valley, and to the highest of mountain tops. He shall never forsake nor leave us; we must have the faith to believe this and forge on through the adversities of life! Your words give us this message without hesitation!
Wonderful words to behold, to remember when the going gets tough......just hold on and follow Him!
And a belated birthday wish to you with hugs and blessings a plenty to go with it!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that.

Thank you Sheila, it was a great dat.

[MOON]

Beautiful lyrical write , we hope what we do is right, lead us not into temptation....