Metaphoric Rising
A Poem by
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
A senryu
Do you catch my drift?
Cause I speak in
helium
In hopes that minds
fly.
© 2016 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
Reviews
dear Dale...
"I catch your drift now
as clouds float away up high
I am looking up" ...
A Haiku for you... Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Why thank you for that poetic response.
8 Years Ago
You are welcome... Pat
Your senryus are strong, and this is no exception.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Your senryus are strong, and this is no exception.
8 Years Ago
Why thank you kindly.
It amazes me how each line has a story all its own. And when woven together, they form a moving anthem. So glad you're still here, my friend.
Posted 8 Years Ago
It amazes me how each line has a story all its own. And when woven together, they form a moving anthem. So glad you're still here, my friend.
8 Years Ago
Thank you sir... glad to still see you here as well.
Super!
You must breathe helium into your poems because your words lift me!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Super!
You must breathe helium into your poems because your words lift me!
8 Years Ago
Awe shucks... that is the nicest compliment... EVER!!
8 Years Ago
C'mon. I'm sure you've had WAY better. But you're welcome. :)
8 Years Ago
There is nothing better to hear than you lift others up.
8 Years Ago
That is true actually. :)
my mind flies..often down more than up...but it flies...
love it.
j.
Posted 8 Years Ago
my mind flies..often down more than up...but it flies...
love it.
j.
8 Years Ago
As long as it don't hit the ground... too hard, LOL
Thanks Jacob
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Added on September 26, 2016
Last Updated on September 26, 2016
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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE) It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R..
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