Metaphoric Rising

A senryu

 

Do you catch my drift?

Cause I speak in helium

In hopes that minds fly.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale...
"I catch your drift now
as clouds float away up high
I am looking up" ...
A Haiku for you... Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you for that poetic response.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome... Pat

[Lyn Anderson]

Your senryus are strong, and this is no exception.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you kindly.

[An owl on the moon]

It amazes me how each line has a story all its own. And when woven together, they form a moving anthem. So glad you're still here, my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir... glad to still see you here as well.

[Papaya]

Super!
You must breathe helium into your poems because your words lift me!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks... that is the nicest compliment... EVER!!

[Papaya]

C'mon. I'm sure you've had WAY better. But you're welcome. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

There is nothing better to hear than you lift others up.

[Papaya]

That is true actually. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my mind flies..often down more than up...but it flies...

love it.

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

As long as it don't hit the ground... too hard, LOL
Thanks Jacob