Stopping The Sickle

A senryu

 

Your bully sickle

Can’t strike us all down when we

Plant a field of love.

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Nice idea but there are a lot of bl--dy sickles out there.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is sadly true.

[J. J. Nightingale]

RIGHT !!!


NICE....

JAZZY

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Sir....... Jazz

[barleygirl]

Very original & powerful way to state this simple concept (((HUGS)))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Much appreciate your feedback.

[1VJ]

'bully sickle' interesting concept when it comes to those marauders, well-spoken Senryu.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[MomzillaNC]

Another poetry form I’ve never gotten the hang of. It’s rare that I can keep a poem short. This one speaks volumes in so few words – well penned.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... it is a challenge I love taking.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[Lydia Shutter]

Planting seeds of kindness is what we all need to do....otherwise we are doomed. You have said so much here. Lydi**

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

so very true, thank you Lydia.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale... the greatest barrier is kindness
and love... truly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that. Thank you.

[Patricia Wedel]

We are here to pick up the pieces... and
encourage each other with understanding
and love... there is a better way... Amen

[Papaya]

I know this has a different meeting but it makes me think of that lightning strike in Norway that killed hundreds of deer all at once.
Love creates a strong barrier against hate. I like this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.
I heard bout that, unbelieveable.

[Lyn Anderson]

Cowboy, you have such a way with senryu's. I feel they are kind of your calling. Now, I wonder who carries a bully sickle. I could think of a few people. Some famous, some not.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Unfortunately their are many that do,, well actually one is too many.
Glad you like my senryus, I enjoy creating them.